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Vary sentence structure: Instead of using the same subject-verb-object pattern repeatedly, try incorporating different sentence structures, such as starting with adverbial phrases, using subordinate clauses, or rearranging the word order.
Use transition words: Incorporate more transition words and phrases to help guide the reader through the text and establish logical connections between ideas. Examples include "furthermore," "in addition," "on the other hand," "in contrast," etc.
Employ active voice: Where possible, use active voice constructions rather than passive voice to make the text more engaging and easier to follow.
Consider paragraph structure: Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea or topic, and that the paragraphs flow logically from one to the next.
Vary sentence length: Mix shorter, more concise sentences with longer, more complex ones to create a more natural and varied rhythm.
Avoid repetition: Look for opportunities to rephrase or rewrite sentences to avoid repetitive phrasing or vocabulary.
Consider audience and purpose: Keep the target audience and the overall purpose of the text in mind when making revisions, to ensure the language and style are appropriate.
Remember, the specific changes needed will depend on the original content and your desired outcome. I hope these general suggestions are helpful as you work to improve the readability and flow of the text.
product information:
Attribute | Value | ||||
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product_dimensions | 72 x 18 x 0.1 inches; 0.96 ounces | ||||
item_model_number | 840158 | ||||
department | womens | ||||
date_first_available | April 2, 2019 | ||||
manufacturer | Galleria Enterprises | ||||
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